Going Postal Comic Adaptation6

Hello Everybody!

I am very interested in producing an official graphic novel adaptation of Terry Pratchett's Going Postal, my personal favorite Discworld novel. I realize there is a lot involved in that of course, and I am putting together a packet to send to Mr. Pratchett and his representatives. But, before I stick it in the mail, I wanted to post some samples online, and see what you guys all thought.

The 3 sample pages I've created are are the 9000 Year Prologue, and the scene right after Moist walks the Postman's Walk. I have another page almost finished (The Genua or Bust/Proposal) that I'll get up in a day or two. I chose these scenes because they were indicative of the novel as a whole, and would enable me to draw most of the main characters (Moist in his full golden suit, Miss Dearheart, and Reacher Gilt to follow.)

So, what do you think?

I realize that Terry Pratchett's words and concepts are all copyrighted, and I am in no way trying to infringe or go any farther with this if it's not something that Mr. Pratchett is interested in. Moderators, please let me know if this is inappropriate in any way.

Thank you very much!

Ray Friesen